a poem i wrotei don't think it's that good thoughbut read it and tell me what yo

a poem i wrote.i don't think it's that good though.but read it and tell me what you think.

i miss the way i used to be.

so happy and carefree.

not worrying about

where my life may lead.

i used to smile

and really mean it.

not having to fake it.

but now i'm the opposite

of what used to be me.

I'm sad and depressed.

always worrying about

the life i lead.

i may smile

but it's different than before.

now i smile

just to hide how i really feel.

i miis the person i used to be

so happy and carefree.

not having to worry about

where my life would lead.

but times have changed.

and so have i.

and all that's left of me

is a shell of what i used to be....

	buriedwreckage: 06/08/2007 2:57 PM I think it's very good..
	bertmccrackensonly: 06/08/2007 2:59 PM really??
	buriedwreckage: 06/08/2007 3:08 PM Yes, really. :)
	bertmccrackensonly: 06/08/2007 3:09 PM thanks. ^_^
	buriedwreckage: 06/08/2007 3:18 PM :)
	friday13: 06/08/2007 3:48 PM Very good.=)
	eeleenaa..!!!: 06/08/2007 4:16 PM hey its just like me i was a happy person and now i'm always sad and depressed... i have a fake smile to hide my real feelings its really sad to be like that... Its a good poem!!
	ilovezacky: 06/08/2007 5:49 PM hey its really good :] i can understand where your coming from.....its like, when you were younger, everything was fine because you didnt understand the problems in ur life, but now that ur older, u understand those problems and they all have an effect on you, which is y u seem depressed and more sad...
	lain06: 06/10/2007 1:11 AM that is a very nice poem...i know what you feel...when we were kids we had not all these fucking thougts and problems...i love ya!
	wickedgirl666: 06/11/2007 9:39 AM I agree with everybody, it's really nice. I love it. it totally reminds me of me... I changed like that too some years ago.

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